Need Your Help, Time and Opinions. Preeeety please?

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Just lost an entire post cos the time or something was out.

Basic gist: Please, please please please visit flynnanigans and cast your eye over the bit of the first chapter of my original story there.

I'm going in for a huge national competition which, if I win (as if) I get a fifty grand advance and the novel published. I need your constructive criticism, your opinions, your thoughts and questions. I value all of these things. Don't be scared of upsetting/offending/enraging me. I have a pretty thick skin and respect everyone on my friends list far too much for any of that caper.

Please, my dear friends, if you can spare the time, head on over to my shiny new writing journal and check it out.

Hugs to you all.

The competition I'm going in for: How To Get Published